Changeset 0db44dc for prologue/common/organization.xml

Timestamp:

Sep 2, 2006, 10:53:20 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Joe Ciccone <jciccone@…>

Children:

bc7262e

Parents:

0830bb9

Message:

Applied the text updates in r2527 from trunk to the 1.0 branch.

File:

• prologue/common/organization.xml (modified) (1 diff)

prologue/common/organization.xml

@@ -64 +64 @@
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
-    <para>The Appendices contain various information that doesn't really fit
-    anywhere else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
-    terms used in the book, Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
-    have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
-    and D have information about package dependencies and the the
-    build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
+    <para>The appendices contain information that doesn't really fit anywhere
+    else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
+    terms used in the book; Appendix B gives acknowledgments to people
+    who have helped work on the CLFS project and website; Appendix C and
+    D have information about package dependencies and the the build
+    order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
     arch-specific issues.</para>