Changeset 0db44dc


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Timestamp:
Sep 2, 2006, 10:53:20 AM (18 years ago)
Author:
Joe Ciccone <jciccone@…>
Children:
bc7262e
Parents:
0830bb9
Message:

Applied the text updates in r2527 from trunk to the 1.0 branch.

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  • introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml

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    6565 <itemizedlist>
    6666    <listitem>
    67       <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisted in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
     67      <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisting in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
    6868    </listitem>
    6969    <listitem>
    … …  
    7878  </itemizedlist>
    7979
    80 <para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge people who
    81 have supported, spotted needed corrections, and testing of the cross-lfs book
    82 via the CLFS-DEV Mailing lists.</para>
     80  <para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge contributions of people
     81  from <ulink url="clfs-dev@lists.cross-lfs.org"/> and associated mailing lists
     82  who have provided valuable technical and editorial corrections while testing
     83  the Cross-LFS book.</para>
    8384
    8485 <itemizedlist>

  • prologue/common/organization.xml

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    6464    <title>Appendices</title>
    6565
    66     <para>The Appendices contain various information that doesn't really fit
    67     anywhere else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
    68     terms used in the book, Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
    69     have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
    70     and D have information about package dependencies and the the
    71     build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
     66    <para>The appendices contain information that doesn't really fit anywhere
     67    else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
     68    terms used in the book; Appendix B gives acknowledgments to people
     69    who have helped work on the CLFS project and website; Appendix C and
     70    D have information about package dependencies and the the build
     71    order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
    7272    arch-specific issues.</para>
    7373
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