Changeset f933d85 for BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml

Timestamp:

Jul 17, 2006, 11:30:15 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jeremy Utley <jerutley@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

435b0aa

Parents:

35b75e6

Message:

Minor foreword fixes thanks to Karen

File:

• BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
   improvements to the Linux From Scratch system.</para>
 
-  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on a x86
+  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on an x86
   class processor.  With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
   processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
@@ -40 +40 @@
 
   <para>We hope you enjoy building your own CLFS system, and the benefits
-  that come from a system tailored to your needs!</para>
+  that come from a system tailored to your needs.</para>
 
 <literallayout>--
@@ -46 +46 @@
 Jim Gifford, CLFS Project Co-leader
 Ryan Oliver, CLFS Project Co-leader
-Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierin, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
+Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierim, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
 Manuel Canales Esparcia, and Nathan Coulson - CLFS Developers</literallayout>