Changeset f933d85 for BOOK

Timestamp:

Jul 17, 2006, 11:30:15 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jeremy Utley <jerutley@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

435b0aa

Parents:

35b75e6

Message:

Minor foreword fixes thanks to Karen

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• general.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prologue/common/foreword.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

BOOK/general.ent

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "July">
-<!ENTITY day "16"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "17"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 

BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml

@@ -38 +38 @@
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>July 17, 2006</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[jeremy] - Minor foreword fixups courtesy of Karen`.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>July 16, 2006</para>
       <itemizedlist>

BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
   improvements to the Linux From Scratch system.</para>
 
-  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on a x86
+  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on an x86
   class processor.  With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
   processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
@@ -40 +40 @@
 
   <para>We hope you enjoy building your own CLFS system, and the benefits
-  that come from a system tailored to your needs!</para>
+  that come from a system tailored to your needs.</para>
 
 <literallayout>--
@@ -46 +46 @@
 Jim Gifford, CLFS Project Co-leader
 Ryan Oliver, CLFS Project Co-leader
-Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierin, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
+Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierim, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
 Manuel Canales Esparcia, and Nathan Coulson - CLFS Developers</literallayout>