Changeset eb7a60c for BOOK

Timestamp:

Jul 3, 2014, 1:33:29 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-3.0.0-systemd, master, systemd

Children:

23fe99b

Parents:

4d8d705

Message:

Text updates for sparc partitioning page

File:

• BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/partitioning/sparc/creatingpartition.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
   <para>On a Sparc system we have to create a special partition first. This
   partition is called <quote>Whole disk</quote>, and must be the 3rd partition
-  on the disk.</para>
+  on the disk. The other partitions are virtual slices of this
+  <quote>Whole disk</quote> partition. </para>
 
-  <para>The other partitions are virtual slices of this <quote>Whole disk</quote>
-  partition. But there are some limitations on the first partion of
+  <para>There are some limitations on the first partition of
   <filename class="devicefile">hda</filename> or <filename
   class="devicefile">sda</filename> on the system. This partition must be less
-  than 2 gigabytes and this partition must be root.</para>
+  than 2 gigabytes, and it must be root.</para>
 
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