Changeset 4d8d705 for BOOK

Timestamp:

Jul 3, 2014, 1:33:19 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-3.0.0-systemd, master, systemd

Children:

eb7a60c

Parents:

1708079

Message:

Text updates for mips partitioning

File:

• BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
   xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='e'])"/>
 
-  <para>On a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 we use the existing firmware for a boot loader,
-  it requires an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> revision 0
-  partition to boot from. So here is the recommended partition for a Cobalt
-  RaQ2/Cube2 system:</para>
+  <para>On a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 we use the existing firmware for a boot
+  loader&mdash;it requires an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>
+  revision 0 partition to boot from. Here is the recommended partition layout
+  for a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 system:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
@@ -46 +46 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>The third partition is going to be your swap partition, which will
-      be the same amount as the RAM installed in the system.</para>
+      be the same size as the amount as the RAM installed in the system.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>