Changeset c2f6972 for BOOK/temp-system/common

Timestamp:

Apr 25, 2006, 12:37:22 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

3aa10b0

Parents:

83ba4163

Message:

r3122@server (orig r1465): chris | 2006-04-24 22:04:33 -0700
Minor text/grammar fixes

File:

• BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
   to build the final system. You can build a kernel, a bootloader, and
   a few other utilities, boot into the temporary system, and build the
-  rest there. The other option is to chroot into the temporary system.</para>
+  rest there. Alternatively, you can chroot into the temporary system.</para>
 
   <para os="b">The boot method is for when you are building on a different
@@ -31 +31 @@
 /tools/bin/gcc -v</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="d">If these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
+  <para os="d">If any of these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
   method.</para>