Changeset c2f6972

Timestamp:

Apr 25, 2006, 12:37:22 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

3aa10b0

Parents:

83ba4163

Message:

r3122@server (orig r1465): chris | 2006-04-24 22:04:33 -0700
Minor text/grammar fixes

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• final-system/common/tar.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/zlib.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• temp-system/common/choose.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/final-system/common/tar.xml

@@ -45 +45 @@
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-sparse_fix-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="p5">This patch fixes a security vournability in tar</para>
+    <para os="p5">This patch fixes a security vulnerability in Tar:</para>
 
 <screen os="p6"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-security_fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/common/zlib.xml

@@ -56 +56 @@
     <para os="h">The previous command installed a <filename
     class="extension">.so</filename> file in <filename
-    class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>. We will remove itinto
+    class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>. We will move it into
     <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and then relink it
     to <filename class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>:</para>

BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
   to build the final system. You can build a kernel, a bootloader, and
   a few other utilities, boot into the temporary system, and build the
-  rest there. The other option is to chroot into the temporary system.</para>
+  rest there. Alternatively, you can chroot into the temporary system.</para>
 
   <para os="b">The boot method is for when you are building on a different
@@ -31 +31 @@
 /tools/bin/gcc -v</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para os="d">If these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
+  <para os="d">If any of these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
   method.</para>