Changeset 5d9d2e5 for BOOK/bootable

Timestamp:

May 1, 2006, 12:38:33 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

7a63c4ce

Parents:

eb1e181

Message:

r3217@server (orig r1499): chris | 2006-05-01 10:22:43 -0700
Text/grammar fixes

File:

• BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml

@@ -99 +99 @@
 <screen os="q"><literal>alias char-major-XXX some-module</literal></screen>
 
-    <para os="r">Because of the complications with Hotplug, Udev, and modules,
+    <para os="r">Because of the complications with Udev and modules,
     we strongly recommend starting with a completely non-modular kernel
     configuration, especially if this is the first time using Udev.</para>
@@ -160 +160 @@
       class="directory">include</filename> directory should
       <emphasis>always</emphasis> be the ones against which Glibc was
-      compiled, that is, the ones from the Linux-Libc-Headers package,
-      and therefore, should <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by
-      the kernel headers.</para>
+      compiled (from the Linux-Headers package) and should
+      <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by the kernel headers.</para>
     </warning>