Changeset 5d9d2e5

Timestamp:

May 1, 2006, 12:38:33 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

7a63c4ce

Parents:

eb1e181

Message:

r3217@server (orig r1499): chris | 2006-05-01 10:22:43 -0700
Text/grammar fixes

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• bootable/x86/kernel.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• temp-system/common/bzip2.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml

@@ -99 +99 @@
 <screen os="q"><literal>alias char-major-XXX some-module</literal></screen>
 
-    <para os="r">Because of the complications with Hotplug, Udev, and modules,
+    <para os="r">Because of the complications with Udev and modules,
     we strongly recommend starting with a completely non-modular kernel
     configuration, especially if this is the first time using Udev.</para>
@@ -160 +160 @@
       class="directory">include</filename> directory should
       <emphasis>always</emphasis> be the ones against which Glibc was
-      compiled, that is, the ones from the Linux-Libc-Headers package,
-      and therefore, should <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by
-      the kernel headers.</para>
+      compiled (from the Linux-Headers package) and should
+      <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by the kernel headers.</para>
     </warning>
 

BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     and no Threads</title>
 
-    <para os="aa">First make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
+    <para os="aa">Make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
     to ensure GCC uses our build environment:</para>
 

BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml

@@ -36 +36 @@
     <title>Installation of Powerpc-Utils</title>
 
-    <para>This package, originally pmac-utils, has issues with NewWorld macintoshes.
-    The following patch fixes these issues and generally updates the package.</para>
+    <para>This package, originally pmac-utils, has issues with
+    NewWorld Macintoshes. The following patch fixes these issues
+    and generally updates the package:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&powerpcutils-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Compile the useful programs:</para>
+    <para>Compile the needed programs:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make nvsetenv nvsetvol</userinput></screen>

BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
     <title>Installation of Bzip2</title>
 
-    <para os="ca">Remove the tests since they won't work on a
+    <para os="ca">Bzip's default Makefile target automatically runs
+    the testsuite as well. Disable the tests since they won't work on a
     multi-architecture build:</para>