Changeset 5c05e8f for prologue/common

Timestamp:

Jul 17, 2006, 8:58:44 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Children:

82a8dbfc

Parents:

26d26cc

Message:

Text updates, and addition of a clfs-wiki entity to account for the difference between the CLFS trac website and the package/patch download site

Location:

prologue/common

Files:

• audience.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prerequisites.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

prologue/common/audience.xml

@@ -68 +68 @@
   correctly and adequately fixes the problem.</para>
 
-  <para>The goal of Linux From Scratch is to build a complete and usable
+  <para>The goal of Cross Linux From Scratch is to build a complete and usable
   foundation-level system. Readers who do not wish to build their own
   Linux system from scratch may not benefit from the information in this

prologue/common/prerequisites.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
   Linux software. A basic knowledge of the architectures being used in 
   the Cross LFS process and the host operating systems in use is also
-  required</para>
+  required.</para>
 
   <para>Because the CLFS book assumes <emphasis>at least</emphasis> this basic
@@ -26 +26 @@
   provide you with much assistance; you will find that your questions regarding
   such basic knowledge will likely go unanswered, or you will simply be referred
-  to the LFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
+  to the CLFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
 
   <para>Before building a CLFS system, we recommend reading the following
@@ -49 +49 @@
       <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
 
-      <para>This is an LFS Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
+      <para>This is an Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
       It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
       wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an