Changeset 5c05e8f

Timestamp:

Jul 18, 2006, 3:58:44 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Children:

82a8dbfc

Parents:

26d26cc

Message:

Text updates, and addition of a clfs-wiki entity to account for the difference between the CLFS trac website and the package/patch download site

Files:

• final-system/x86_64/grub.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/resources.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• prologue/common/audience.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prologue/common/prerequisites.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

final-system/x86_64/grub.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='p2'])"/>
 
-   <para os="p3">The follow patch will fix an issue that exists
-   with grub on x86_64 machines, that causes grub to segfault when you
-   try to configure a drive to utilize grub:</para>
+    <para os="p3">GRUB has an issue that can cause it to segfault when you
+    try to configure a drive to utilize GRUB on x86_64 machines. The following
+    patch fixes this problem:</para>
 
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&grub-use_mmap-patch;</userinput></screen>

general.ent

@@ -30 +30 @@
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">
-<!ENTITY clfs-root "http://trac.cross-lfs.org/">
+<!ENTITY clfs-root "http://cross-lfs.org/">
+<!ENTITY clfs-wiki "http://trac.cross-lfs.org/">
 <!ENTITY blfs-root "&lfs-root;blfs/">
-<!ENTITY faq-root "&clfs-root;/wiki/faq">
+<!ENTITY faq-root "&clfs-root;wiki/faq">
 <!ENTITY hints-root "&lfs-root;hints/downloads/files/">
 <!ENTITY hints-index "&lfs-root;hints/list.html">
 <!ENTITY livecd-root "&lfs-root;livecd/">
-<!ENTITY test-results "&clfs-root;clfs/build-logs/&generic-version;/">
-<!ENTITY errata "&clfs-root;clfs/errata/&generic-version;/">
+<!ENTITY test-results "&clfs-wiki;clfs/build-logs/&generic-version;/">
+<!ENTITY errata "&clfs-wiki;clfs/errata/&generic-version;/">
 
 <!ENTITY gnu "http://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/">

introduction/common/changelog.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
   &releasedate;. If this book is more than six months old, a newer and better
   version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of the
-  mirrors via <ulink url="&clfs-root;"/>.</para>
+  mirrors via <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;"/>.</para>
 
   <para>Below is a list of detailed changes made since the previous release of

introduction/common/resources.xml

@@ -34 +34 @@
    
     <para>For information on the different lists, how to subscribe, archive
-    locations, and additional information, visit <ulink url="&clfs-root;wiki/lists"/>.</para>
+    locations, and additional information, visit <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/lists"/>.</para>i
 
   </sect2>
@@ -70 +70 @@
     accessing the website and downloading the required packages more
     convenient. Please visit the CLFS website at
-    <ulink url="&clfs-root;wiki/mirrors"/> for mirrors of CLFS.</para>
+    <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/mirrors"/> for mirrors of CLFS.</para>
 
   </sect2>

prologue/common/audience.xml

@@ -68 +68 @@
   correctly and adequately fixes the problem.</para>
 
-  <para>The goal of Linux From Scratch is to build a complete and usable
+  <para>The goal of Cross Linux From Scratch is to build a complete and usable
   foundation-level system. Readers who do not wish to build their own
   Linux system from scratch may not benefit from the information in this

prologue/common/prerequisites.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
   Linux software. A basic knowledge of the architectures being used in 
   the Cross LFS process and the host operating systems in use is also
-  required</para>
+  required.</para>
 
   <para>Because the CLFS book assumes <emphasis>at least</emphasis> this basic
@@ -26 +26 @@
   provide you with much assistance; you will find that your questions regarding
   such basic knowledge will likely go unanswered, or you will simply be referred
-  to the LFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
+  to the CLFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
 
   <para>Before building a CLFS system, we recommend reading the following
@@ -49 +49 @@
       <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
 
-      <para>This is an LFS Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
+      <para>This is an Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
       It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
       wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an