Changeset 1910c6f for BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml

Timestamp:

Nov 25, 2006, 8:57:13 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

8d6b927

Parents:

36d9f4c

Message:

Text updates

File:

• BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml

@@ -96 +96 @@
 
     <para os="i">Move the <command>ping</command> and <command>ping6</command>
-     program to its FHS-compliant place:</para>
+     programs to their FHS-compliant place:</para>
 
 <screen os="j"><userinput>mv -v /usr/bin/ping{,6} /bin</userinput></screen>
@@ -142 +142 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>Sends echo-request packets and reports how long the replies
-          take this is the IPV4 version</para>
+          take. This is the IPV4 version</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-inetutils ping">
             <primary sortas="b-ping">ping</primary>
@@ -153 +153 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>Sends echo-request packets and reports how long the replies
-          take this is the IPV6 version</para>
+          take. This is the IPV6 version</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-inetutils ping6">
             <primary sortas="b-ping6">ping6</primary>