Changeset 1910c6f for BOOK

Timestamp:

Nov 25, 2006, 8:57:13 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

8d6b927

Parents:

36d9f4c

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• final-system/common/autoconf.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/inetutils.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• temp-system/common/gzip.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/autoconf.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
 
     <para os="e">To test the results, issue:
-    <userinput>make check</userinput>. 2 tests are skipped that use
+    <userinput>make check</userinput>. 6 tests are skipped that use
     Automake.  For full test coverage, Autoconf can be re-tested after
     Automake has been installed.</para>

BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml

@@ -96 +96 @@
 
     <para os="i">Move the <command>ping</command> and <command>ping6</command>
-     program to its FHS-compliant place:</para>
+     programs to their FHS-compliant place:</para>
 
 <screen os="j"><userinput>mv -v /usr/bin/ping{,6} /bin</userinput></screen>
@@ -142 +142 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>Sends echo-request packets and reports how long the replies
-          take this is the IPV4 version</para>
+          take. This is the IPV4 version</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-inetutils ping">
             <primary sortas="b-ping">ping</primary>
@@ -153 +153 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>Sends echo-request packets and reports how long the replies
-          take this is the IPV6 version</para>
+          take. This is the IPV6 version</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-inetutils ping6">
             <primary sortas="b-ping6">ping6</primary>

BOOK/temp-system/common/gzip.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
     <title>Installation of Gzip</title>
 
-    <para os="aa">Setup <command>configure</command> so it can use cross-compiled
-    tools:</para>
+    <para os="aa">The <command>configure</command> script needs a small
+    modification when using cross-compiled tools:</para>
 
 <screen os="ab"><userinput>cp -v configure{,.orig}