Changeset 0764f45 for BOOK

Timestamp:

Jul 1, 2006, 9:31:22 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

a90a072

Parents:

8300133

Message:

Minor grammar fixes

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• final-system/common/gettext.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/perl.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/gettext.xml

@@ -56 +56 @@
         msgexec, msgfilter, msgfmt, msggrep, msginit, msgmerge, msgunfmt, msguniq,
         ngettext, and xgettext</seg>
-        <seg>libasprintf.[a,so], libgettextlib,so, libgettextpo.[a,so], and
-        libgettextsrc,so</seg>
+        <seg>libasprintf.[a,so], libgettextlib.so, libgettextpo.[a,so], and
+        libgettextsrc.so</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>

BOOK/final-system/common/perl.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
     <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file which will be referenced in one
     of Perl's configuration files as well as being used used by the testsuite
-    if you run that.</para>
+    if you run that:</para>
 
 <screen os="a01"><userinput>echo "127.0.0.1 localhost $(hostname)" &gt; /etc/hosts</userinput></screen>

BOOK/general.ent

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "July">
-<!ENTITY day "01"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "02"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 

BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml

@@ -38 +38 @@
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>July 2, 2006</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[Chris] - Updated passwd and group file creation
+                to only create minimal users and groups and
+                include information on other users/groups.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>July 1, 2006</para>
       <itemizedlist>