Changeset 0636f6c for boot/common/whatnext.xml

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:57:38 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

4d6fcf9

Parents:

db38a36

Message:

r981@server (orig r979): jim | 2005-12-30 10:11:32 -0800

r1226@server: cstaub | 2005-12-30 08:35:37 -0800
Updated package deps, removed explanation of cross-compiling from final-system binutils, and removed note about GRUB's testsuite failure

File:

• boot/common/whatnext.xml (modified) (1 diff)

boot/common/whatnext.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>What to do next</title>
 
-  <para>Now your at the point to get your <filename
+  <para>Now you're at the point to get your <filename
   class="directory">${LFS}</filename> directory copied over to your target
-  machine. The easiest method would be to tar and copy the file up.</para>
+  machine. The easiest method would be to tar it up and copy the file.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>tar -jcvf ${LFS}.tar.bz2 ${LFS}</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Some others have came up with other idea's on how to do this.
+  <para>Some others have came up with other ideas on how to do this.
   Below is a table with the method and link to where the information
   is stored.</para>