Changeset 0898274 for introduction/common/askforhelp.xml

Timestamp:

Jul 15, 2006, 9:20:45 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Children:

48ea888

Parents:

8d937fb3

Message:

Text fixes

File:

• introduction/common/askforhelp.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

introduction/common/askforhelp.xml

@@ -48 +48 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>The value of the $CLFS_HOST, $CLFS_TARGET, $BUILD32, and $BUILD64
-        enviornment variables.</para>
+        environment variables.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -60 +60 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>Note whether you have deviated from the book at all. A package
-        change or even a minor change to any command is considered deviation.
-        </para>
+        version change or even a minor change to any command is considered
+        deviation.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -80 +80 @@
     <para>If something goes wrong while running the <command>configure</command>
     script, review the <filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may
-    contain the errors you encountered <command>configure</command>. This file
-    logs errors that may have not been printed to the screen. Include only the
-    <emphasis>relevant</emphasis> lines if you need to ask for help.</para>
+    contain the errors you encountered during <command>configure</command>.
+    It often logs errors that may have not been printed to the screen. Include
+    only the <emphasis>relevant</emphasis> lines if you need to ask for
+    help.</para>
 
   </sect2>