Changeset feaf98b for BOOK/prologue/common

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:41:15 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

cf682c1

Parents:

0a6f670

Message:

r883@server (orig r881): jim | 2005-12-10 01:34:48 -0800

r1037@server: jim | 2005-12-10 01:23:24 -0800
Updated text. Thanx Chris Staub

File:

• BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
 
     <para>Part I explains a few important notes on how to proceed with the
-    LFS installation. This section also provides meta-information about
+    Cross-LFS installation. This section also provides meta-information about
     the book.</para>
 
@@ -34 +34 @@
     <para>Part III shows you how to make a set of Cross-Compiler
           tools. These tools allow you make a set of tools
-          that will run on your host system, but build allow
-          you to cross-build packages for your target system</para>
+          that will run on your host system, but will allow
+          you to cross-build packages for your target system.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -45 +45 @@
           to operate on your target system. These are the tools
           that will allow you to build a working system on your 
-          target host </para>
+          target host.</para>
 
   </sect2>