Changeset fe4de21 in clfs-sysroot for BOOK/prologue

Timestamp:

Jul 16, 2006, 6:12:02 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Joe Ciccone <jciccone@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

163e64e

Parents:

5d21368

Message:

Text updates from trunk.

Location:

BOOK/prologue/common

Files:

• foreword.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• organization.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>The Linux From Scratch Project has seen many changes in the
-  few years of its existance.  I personally became involved with the
+  few years of its existence.  I personally became involved with the
   project in 1999, around the time of the 2.x releases.  At that time,
   the build process was to create static binaries with the host system,
@@ -29 +29 @@
   processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
   Ryan Oliver developed and documented a process by which you could
-  build Linux for any system and from any system; by use of
+  build Linux for any system and from any system, by use of
   cross-compilation techniques.  Thus,  the Cross LFS project was born.</para>
 
@@ -36 +36 @@
   of having built the system yourself.  Additionally, during a CLFS
   build, you will learn advanced techniques such as cross-build toolchains,
-  multilib support (32 & 64-bit libraries side-by-side), alternative
+  multilib support (32 &amp; 64-bit libraries side-by-side), alternative
   architectures such as Sparc, MIPS, and Alpha, and much more.</para>
 

BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml

@@ -69 +69 @@
     have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
     and D have information about package dependencies and the the
-    build order.</para>
+    build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
+    arch-specific issues.</para>
 
   </sect2>