Changeset f4daf82

Timestamp:

Jul 29, 2014, 4:21:50 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-3.0.0-systemd, master, systemd

Children:

31072b5

Parents:

6387d9d

Message:

Reworded note on kernel page

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• boot/x86/kernel.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• bootable/x86/kernel.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/boot/x86/kernel.xml

@@ -61 +61 @@
     architecture into account.</para>
 
-    <para>Be sure to enable or disable following features or the system might
-    not work correctly or boot at all:</para>
+    <para>Be sure that the following features are enabled or disabled
+    as shown below, or the system might not work correctly or boot at all:</para>
 
     <screen role="nodump">Device Drivers  ---&gt;

BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml

@@ -45 +45 @@
     architecture into account.</para>
 
-    <para>Be sure to enable or disable following features or the system might
-    not work correctly or boot at all. Refer to
-    <filename>/usr/share/doc/systemd-&systemd-version;/README</filename>:</para>
+    <para>Be sure that the following features are enabled or disabled
+    as shown below, or the system might not work correctly or boot at all.
+    Refer to <filename>/usr/share/doc/systemd-&systemd-version;/README</filename>:</para>
 
     <screen role="nodump">General setup  ---&gt;