Changeset ed3e5d8 for introduction/common

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:55:04 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

10c15e3

Parents:

5c41d32

Message:

r967@server (orig r965): jim | 2005-12-26 22:57:04 -0800

r1199@server: jim | 2005-12-26 22:55:55 -0800
Grammar fixes from Chris Staub. Thank you

Location:

introduction/common

Files:

• acknowledgements.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• how.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
 
   <para>The editors of the book would like to acknowledge people who
-  have assisted in making the book, what it is today.</para>
+  have assisted in making the book what it is today.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>

introduction/common/how.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
 
   <!-- -->
-  <para>THE TEXT BELOW NEED TO BE REWRITTEN</para>
+  <para>THE TEXT BELOW NEEDS TO BE REWRITTEN</para>
 
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-partitioning"/> of this book describes how
@@ -40 +40 @@
   <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
   important issues the developer should be aware of before beginning to
-  work through <xref linkend="chapter-temp-system"/> and
+  work through <xref linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/> and
   beyond.</para>