Changeset ed3e5d8 for introduction


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Timestamp:
Feb 21, 2006, 1:55:04 AM (19 years ago)
Author:
Jim Gifford <clfs@…>
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10c15e3
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r967@server (orig r965): jim | 2005-12-26 22:57:04 -0800

r1199@server: jim | 2005-12-26 22:55:55 -0800
Grammar fixes from Chris Staub. Thank you


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introduction/common
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2 edited

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  • introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml

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    1111
    1212  <para>The editors of the book would like to acknowledge people who
    13   have assisted in making the book, what it is today.</para>
     13  have assisted in making the book what it is today.</para>
    1414
    1515  <itemizedlist>

  • introduction/common/how.xml

    r5c41d32 red3e5d8  
    2929
    3030  <!-- -->
    31   <para>THE TEXT BELOW NEED TO BE REWRITTEN</para>
     31  <para>THE TEXT BELOW NEEDS TO BE REWRITTEN</para>
    3232
    3333  <para><xref linkend="chapter-partitioning"/> of this book describes how
    … …  
    4040  <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
    4141  important issues the developer should be aware of before beginning to
    42   work through <xref linkend="chapter-temp-system"/> and
     42  work through <xref linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/> and
    4343  beyond.</para>
    4444
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