Changeset ed3e5d8 for final-preps

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:55:04 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

10c15e3

Parents:

5c41d32

Message:

r967@server (orig r965): jim | 2005-12-26 22:57:04 -0800

r1199@server: jim | 2005-12-26 22:55:55 -0800
Grammar fixes from Chris Staub. Thank you

Location:

final-preps

Files:

• aboutlfs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• addinguser.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• creatingcrossdir.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

final-preps/aboutlfs.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
   processes the command line.</para>
 
-  <para>If you haven't created the <filename class="directory">/mnt/lfs</filename>
+  <para>If you haven't created the <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename>
   directory, do so at this time by issuing the following commands:</para>
 

final-preps/addinguser.xml

@@ -82 +82 @@
   <filename class="directory">$LFS/cross-tools</filename>, 
   and <filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename> by making <systemitem
-  class="username">lfs</systemitem> the directories owner:</para>
+  class="username">lfs</systemitem> the directorys' owner:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>chown lfs $LFS
@@ -88 +88 @@
 chown lfs $LFS/cross-tools</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>If a separate working directory was created as suggested, we will
-  show you how to create the directory and give user <systemitem
-  class="username">lfs</systemitem> ownership of this directory:</para>
+  <para>If a separate working directory was created as suggested, 
+  give user <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem> ownership of this directory:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>install -d $LFS/sources
-chown lfs $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>chown lfs $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>Next, login as user <systemitem class="username">lfs</systemitem>.

final-preps/creatingcrossdir.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
   <para>The next step is to create a <filename
   class="symlink">/cross-tools</filename> symlink on the host system.
-  This will point to the newly-created directory in your home directory.
-  Since normal users will not have permissions to write to the root tree,
-  we need to exit the <command>su</command> and run the symlink command as
-  <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
+  This will point to the newly-created directory on the LFS partition.
+  Run this command as  <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> as well:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>ln -s $LFS/cross-tools /</userinput></screen>
@@ -34 +32 @@
   <para>The created symlink enables the toolchain to be compiled so that
   it always refers to <filename class="directory">/cross-tools</filename>,
-  meaning that the compiler, assembler, and linker will be avaialble for
+  meaning that the compiler, assembler, and linker will be available for
   use later if some unforseen circumstances happen.</para>