Changeset e5be257


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Timestamp:
Apr 25, 2006, 12:37:22 AM (18 years ago)
Author:
Jim Gifford <clfs@…>
Children:
5023d37
Parents:
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Message:

r3122@server (orig r1465): chris | 2006-04-24 22:04:33 -0700
Minor text/grammar fixes

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3 edited

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  • final-system/common/tar.xml

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    4545<screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-sparse_fix-patch;</userinput></screen>
    4646
    47     <para os="p5">This patch fixes a security vournability in tar</para>
     47    <para os="p5">This patch fixes a security vulnerability in Tar:</para>
    4848
    4949<screen os="p6"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-security_fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>
  • final-system/common/zlib.xml

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    5656    <para os="h">The previous command installed a <filename
    5757    class="extension">.so</filename> file in <filename
    58     class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>. We will remove itinto
     58    class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>. We will move it into
    5959    <filename class="directory">/lib</filename> and then relink it
    6060    to <filename class="directory">/usr/lib</filename>:</para>
  • temp-system/common/choose.xml

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    1414  to build the final system. You can build a kernel, a bootloader, and
    1515  a few other utilities, boot into the temporary system, and build the
    16   rest there. The other option is to chroot into the temporary system.</para>
     16  rest there. Alternatively, you can chroot into the temporary system.</para>
    1717
    1818  <para os="b">The boot method is for when you are building on a different
     
    3131/tools/bin/gcc -v</userinput></screen>
    3232
    33   <para os="d">If these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
     33  <para os="d">If any of these commands fail, you will have to follow the boot
    3434  method.</para>
    3535
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