Changeset e4f6ff4 in clfs-sysroot

Timestamp:

Nov 25, 2006, 10:14:53 AM (17 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

d11b860

Parents:

1d53724

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• cross-tools/common/shadow.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• final-system/arm/perl.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• final-system/common/bzip2.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/coreutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/inetutils.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• general.ent (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/cross-tools/common/shadow.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <para>The following patch changes the hard-coded <filename>/etc</filename>
     in the sources to whatever was passed to configure. It also allows the
-    utilities to run as a user other then root.</para>
+    utilities to run as a user other then root:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&shadow-sysroot_hacks-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The following value is added to <filename>config.cache</filename> to
-    make sure that the <filename>passwd</filename> program is found.</para>
+    make sure that the <filename>passwd</filename> program is found:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "shadow_cv_passwd_dir=${CLFS}/bin" &gt; config.cache</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>The following value causes Shadow to use it's internal lckpwdf
-    instead of the one provided by glibc. The one provided by glibc will
+    <para>The following value causes Shadow to use its internal lckpwdf
+    instead of the one provided by Glibc. The one provided by Glibc will
     attempt to modify the host system:</para>
 
@@ -45 +45 @@
     --without-selinux --program-prefix=${CLFS_TARGET}- --cache-file=config.cache</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Add the proper suffix to the <filename>passwd</filename> program.</para>
+    <para>Add the proper prefix to the <filename>passwd</filename> program:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp config.h{,.orig}

BOOK/final-system/arm/perl.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
     </warning>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patch fixes issues with perl and
+    <para os="p1">The following patch fixes issues with Perl and
     cross-compiling:</para>
 
@@ -43 +43 @@
     -e "s@static_target='static'@static_target='static_pic'@g" Makefile.SH</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="a">The Cross directory contains a Makefile for cross-compiling.</para>
+    <para os="a">The Cross directory contains a Makefile for cross-compiling:</para>
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>cd Cross</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/common/bzip2.xml

@@ -87 +87 @@
 rm -v ${CLFS}/usr/bin/{bunzip2,bzcat,bzip2}
 ln -sv bzip2 ${CLFS}/bin/bunzip2
-ln -sv bzip2 ${CLFS}/bin/bzcatt</userinput></screen>
+ln -sv bzip2 ${CLFS}/bin/bzcat</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>

BOOK/final-system/common/coreutils.xml

@@ -74 +74 @@
 
     <para os="k">Other Coreutils programs are used by some of the scripts
-    in the CLFS-Bootscripts pacakge. As <filename
+    in the CLFS-Bootscripts package. As <filename
     class="directory">/usr</filename> may not be available during the early
     stages of booting, those binaries need to be on the root partition:</para>

BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml

@@ -32 +32 @@
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&inetutils-man_pages-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="s1">The following set of seds prevent binaries from being installed as root</para>
+    <para os="s1">The following set of seds prevent binaries from being
+    installed as setuid <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
 
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>for dir in ping rcp rlogin rsh; do
@@ -101 +102 @@
 
     <para os="h">Move the <command>ping</command> and <command>ping6</command>
-    program to its FHS-compliant place:</para>
+    programs to their FHS-compliant place:</para>
 
 <screen os="i"><userinput>mv -v ${CLFS}/usr/bin/ping{,6} ${CLFS}/bin</userinput></screen>

BOOK/general.ent

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <!ENTITY month "11"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "November">
-<!ENTITY day "24"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "25"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->