Changeset d5d4d82 in clfs-sysroot for BOOK/materials

Timestamp:

Jul 19, 2006, 7:24:03 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Joe Ciccone <jciccone@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

6e439f9

Parents:

c3b61cb

Message:

Text and entity updates.

Location:

BOOK/materials/common

Files:

• introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• patches.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/materials/common/introduction.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
   most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
   alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink
-  url="&clfs-root;wiki/download"/>.</para>
+  url="&packages-root;"/>.</para>
 
   <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere
@@ -42 +42 @@
 <screen><userinput>mkdir -v $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. <quote>Sticky</quote>
-  means that even if multiple users have write permission on a
-  directory, only the owner of a file can delete the file within a
-  sticky directory. The following command will enable the write and
-  sticky modes:</para>
+  <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. When a directory is
+  marked <quote>sticky</quote>, that means that even if multiple users have
+  write permission on that directory, any file within that directory can only be
+  deleted or modified by its owner. The following command will enable the
+  write and sticky modes:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>chmod -v a+wt $CLFS/sources</userinput></screen>

BOOK/materials/common/patches.xml

@@ -15 +15 @@
   fixed by the maintainer. The patches also make small modifications to
   make the packages easier to work with. The following patches will be
-  needed to build an CLFS system:</para>
+  needed to build a CLFS system:</para>
 
   <variablelist role="materials">