Changeset cc1ccdd for BOOK

Timestamp:

Aug 10, 2006, 2:52:00 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

8b459bb

Parents:

f99b745

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• final-system/common/util-linux.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/mips/file.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/mips/glibc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• final-system/mips/grep.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/mips/mktemp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/mips/module-init-tools.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• testsuite-tools/mips/file.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/util-linux.xml

@@ -52 +52 @@
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&util-linux-gcc4_fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="p5">The following patch fixes swapon.c, it tries to find the variable R_OK, but
+    <para os="p5">The following patch fixes swapon.c - it tries to find the variable R_OK, but
     the header that has R_OK is not included:</para>
 

BOOK/final-system/mips/file.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
 
     <para os="m1">This patch updates <filename>config.guess</filename> and
-    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors.</para>
+    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors:</para>
 
 <screen os="m2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&file-config_update-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/mips/glibc.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='b'])"/>
 
-    <para os="g1">MIPS is no longer supported in the main glibc tree, so we have to
+    <para os="g1">MIPS is no longer supported in the main Glibc tree, so we have to
     extract the glibc-ports-&glibc-version; package into our
     glibc-&glibc-version; directory. Then we move
@@ -38 +38 @@
 mv -v glibc-ports-&glibc-version; ports</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="m1">The following patch fixes a link issues when building MIPS glibc:</para>
+    <para os="m1">The following patch fixes link issues when building MIPS Glibc:</para>
 
 <screen os="m2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&glibc-mips-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/mips/grep.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
 
     <para os="p1">This patch updates <filename>config.guess</filename> and
-    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors.</para>
+    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&grep-config_update-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/mips/mktemp.xml

@@ -32 +32 @@
     <para os="p1">The configure files in this package do not recognise all
     of the machines supported by CLFS. This patch updates <filename>config.guess</filename>
-    and <filename>config.sub</filename> for other processors.</para>
+    and <filename>config.sub</filename> for other processors:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&mktemp-update-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/mips/module-init-tools.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
 
     <para os="p1">This patch updates <filename>config.guess</filename> and
-    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors.</para>
+    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&module-init-tools-config_update-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/testsuite-tools/mips/file.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
     <title>Installation of file</title>
 
-    <para os="m1">This patch updates <filename>config.guess</filename> and
-    <filename>config.sub</filename> for MIPS processors.</para>
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
+    href="../../final-system/mips/file.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='m1'])"/>
 
-<screen os="m2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&file-config_update-patch;</userinput></screen>
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
+    href="../../final-system/mips/file.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='m2'])"/>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"