Changeset bc610664 for BOOK/prologue

Timestamp:

Jul 15, 2006, 9:20:45 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

73914cb

Parents:

be2691ee

Message:

Text fixes

Location:

BOOK/prologue/common

Files:

• foreword.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• organization.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>The Linux From Scratch Project has seen many changes in the
-  few years of its existance.  I personally became involved with the
+  few years of its existence.  I personally became involved with the
   project in 1999, around the time of the 2.x releases.  At that time,
   the build process was to create static binaries with the host system,
@@ -29 +29 @@
   processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
   Ryan Oliver developed and documented a process by which you could
-  build Linux for any system and from any system; by use of
+  build Linux for any system and from any system, by use of
   cross-compilation techniques.  Thus,  the Cross LFS project was born.</para>
 

BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml

@@ -69 +69 @@
     have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
     and D have information about package dependencies and the the
-    build order.</para>
+    build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
+    arch-specific issues.</para>
 
   </sect2>