Changeset bbde0c5c

Timestamp:

Jul 18, 2006, 9:43:20 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Children:

6ca89c4

Parents:

b136f39

Message:

Text updates

Files:

• bootable/mips/colo.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• bootable/x86/grub.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/x86/grub.xml (modified) (1 diff)

bootable/mips/colo.xml

@@ -49 +49 @@
   are more examples of a <filename>default.colo</filename> file.</para>
 
-  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
-  href="../x86/grub.xml"
-  xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='v'])"/>
+  <para os="v">The FHS stipulates that the bootloader's configuration file shoul
+d
+  be symlinked to <filename class="symlink">/etc/{Bootloader Name}</filename>.
+  To satisfy this requirement for Colo, issue the following command:</para>
 
 <screen os="f"><userinput>mkdir -v /etc/colo &amp;&amp;

bootable/x86/grub.xml

@@ -131 +131 @@
   website at: <ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/grub/"/>.</para>
 
-  <para os="v">The FHS stipulates that Bootloader's configuration file should
+  <para os="v">The FHS stipulates that the bootloader's configuration file should
   be symlinked to <filename class="symlink">/etc/{Bootloader Name}</filename>.
   To satisfy this requirement for GRUB, issue the following command:</para>

final-system/x86/grub.xml

@@ -25 +25 @@
 
    <para os="p1">GRUB has an issue where it sometimes doesn't detect
-   the disk geometry correctly when used with Linux 2.6. This results
+   the disk geometry correctly when used with Linux 2.6, resulting
    in the error message <literal>Error 24: Attempt to access block outside
-   partition</literal>. This patch also contains various fixes for raid
-   controllers along with support for the new Intel Mac. Apply the
-   following patch using the command below:</para>
+   partition</literal>. The following patch contains a fix for this issue
+   as well as various fixes for raid controllers and support for the
+   new Intel Mac:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&grub-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>