Changeset b8928b0

Timestamp:

Dec 18, 2008, 9:52:33 AM (16 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

d597a7e

Parents:

a1c119a

Message:

More text fixes

Location:

BOOK/final-system

Files:

• common/ncurses.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sparc64-64/glibc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sparc64/inetutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
     <title>Installation of Ncurses</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patches merges all updates from the &ncurses-version; Branch
-    from the Ncurses developers:</para>
+    <para os="p1">The following patch contains updates from the &ncurses-version; branch
+    by the Ncurses developers:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&ncurses-branch_update-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64/glibc.xml

@@ -119 +119 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='t'])"/>
 
-    <para os="u">The stubs.h header installed by glibc looks for stubs-32.h
-    and stubs-64.h. This configuration of glibc only generates stubs-64.h. Fix
+    <para os="u">The stubs.h header installed by Glibc looks for stubs-32.h
+    and stubs-64.h. This configuration of Glibc only generates stubs-64.h. Fix
     this with the following:</para>
 

BOOK/final-system/sparc64/glibc-64bit.xml

@@ -50 +50 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='m2'])"/>
 
-    <para os="t1">For TLS support on the Sparc64 we will need to add the following lines to
+    <para os="t1">For TLS support on the Sparc64 we will need to add the following line to
     <filename>config.cache</filename>:</para>
 

BOOK/final-system/sparc64/inetutils.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='p2'])"/>
 
-    <para os="ap1">The follow patches fixes Bus Errors when you attempt to use
-    ping on sparc:</para>
+    <para os="ap1">The following patch fixes Bus Errors when attempting to use
+    <command>ping<command> on sparc:</para>
 
 <screen os="ap2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&inetutils-memcpy_sparc64-patch;</userinput></screen>