Changeset af4f700 for BOOK

Timestamp:

Dec 15, 2008, 8:41:54 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

37cd310

Parents:

4fdeb4ea

Message:

Minor text fixes

Location:

BOOK/final-system/common

Files:

• module-init-tools.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• vim.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/module-init-tools.xml

@@ -28 +28 @@
     <para os="a1">The tarball only contains sgml source for the manual pages.  The
     following patch contains the result of processing this through
-    <command>docbook2man</command> which we do not build as part of a basic clfs
-    install :</para>
+    <command>docbook2man</command> which we do not build as part of a basic CLFS
+    install:</para>
 
 <screen os="a2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&module-init-tools-manpages-patch;</userinput></screen>
@@ -36 +36 @@
 
     <note os="cc">
-      <para>note that the <command>make clean</command>
-      command is required to clean up the source tree, otherwise the code
-      built for testing will be installed, and the test version of
-      <command>modprobe</command> does not function outside the test
-      environment.</para>
+      <para>The <command>make clean</command> command is required to clean up
+      the source tree, otherwise the code built for testing will be installed,
+      and the test version of <command>modprobe</command> does not function
+      outside the test environment.</para>
     </note>
 

BOOK/final-system/common/vim.xml

@@ -104 +104 @@
     comes with a GUI version of the editor that requires X and some
     additional libraries to be installed. For more information, refer to the
-    Vim documentation and the Vim installation page
-    in the CBLFS book at <ulink
+    Vim documentation and the Vim installation page in CBLFS at <ulink
     url="&cblfs-root;index.php/Vim"/>.</para>