Changeset a04fd507

Timestamp:

Dec 15, 2008, 10:35:19 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

070b2a1

Parents:

e3a8717

Message:

Update date

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• general.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction/common/resources.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/general.ent

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <!ENTITY month "12"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "December">
-<!ENTITY day "15"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "16"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2008"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 

BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
     <title>News Server</title>
 
-    <para>Cross-LFS does not maintain it's own News Server, but we do provide
+    <para>Cross-LFS does not maintain its own News Server, but we do provide
     access via <uri>gmane.org</uri> <ulink url="http://gmane.org"/>. If you want to subscribe
-    to the Cross-LFS via a newsreader you can utilize <uri>gmane.org</uri>.
-    You can find the game search for CLFS with the following link:</para>
+    to the Cross-LFS lists via a newsreader you can utilize <uri>gmane.org</uri>.
+    You can find the gmane search for CLFS with the following link:</para>
 
    <para><ulink url="http://dir.gmane.org/search.php?match=clfs"/></para>