Changeset 9c06d27e for BOOK

Timestamp:

Jun 3, 2009, 12:51:40 PM (16 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

e919614

Parents:

db987d06

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK/bootscripts/common

Files:

• console.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• locale.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/bootscripts/common/console.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
   <para>The default <filename>/etc/sysconfig/i18n</filename> is set up for UTF-8
   using the us keymap. You will need to edit the file to your specific needs.
-  The <filename>/etc/sysconfig/i18n</filename> has additional information it to
-  help you to assist in configuring.</para>
+  The <filename>/etc/sysconfig/i18n</filename> file has additional information
+  in it to help you to assist in configuring.</para>
 
 </sect1>

BOOK/bootscripts/common/locale.xml

@@ -127 +127 @@
   environment variables are the only internationalization steps needed to
   support locales that use ordinary single-byte encodings and left-to-right
-  writing direction. UTF-8 has been testing on the English, French, German,
+  writing direction. UTF-8 has been tested on the English, French, German,
   Italian, and Spanish locales. All other locales are untested. If you discover
-  issues with any other locale please open a ticket in our trac system.</para>
+  issues with any other locale please open a ticket in our Trac system.</para>
 
-  <para>Some locales need addtional programs and support. CLFS will not be supporting
-  these locales via the book. We welcome the support for these other locales via the
-  <ulink url="&cblfs-root;"/>.</para>
+  <para>Some locales need additional programs and support. CLFS will not be
+  supporting these locales in the book. We welcome the support for these other
+  locales via <ulink url="&cblfs-root;"/>.</para>
 
 </sect1>