Changeset 8fdf8edb for BOOK

Timestamp:

Nov 1, 2006, 6:53:51 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

39b5a3f

Parents:

a0f4bc8

Message:

Text fixes

Location:

BOOK/final-system/common

Files:

• e2fsprogs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• man.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -85 +85 @@
     <userinput>make check</userinput>.</para>
 
-    <para os="i">Install the binaries and documentation:</para>
+    <para os="i">Install the binaries, documentation and shared libraries:</para>
 
 <screen os="j"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="k">Install the shared libraries:</para>
+    <para os="k">Install the static libraries and headers:</para>
 
 <screen os="l"><userinput>make install-libs</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/common/man.xml

@@ -35 +35 @@
 <screen os="c"><userinput>sed -i 's@-is@&amp;R@g' configure</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="d">Another <command>sed</command> substitution comments out the
-    <quote>MANPATH /usr/man</quote> and <quote>MANPATH /usr/local/man</quote>
-    lines in the <filename>man.conf</filename> file to prevent redundant
+    <para os="d">Another couple of <command>sed</command> substitutions
+    comment out the <quote>MANPATH /usr/man</quote> and
+    <quote>MANPATH /usr/local/man</quote> lines in the
+    <filename>man.conf</filename> file to prevent redundant
     results when using programs such as <command>whatis</command>:</para>