Changeset 8fd11cd for BOOK

Timestamp:

Aug 16, 2006, 9:33:35 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

f7022e3

Parents:

13e1c34

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK

Files:

• boot/ppc/yaboot-build.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/procps.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/udev.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

BOOK/boot/ppc/yaboot-build.xml

@@ -47 +47 @@
     <para>The Makefile is already set to do kernel-style cross-compiling,
     but it will try to use <command>strip</command> to strip the second-stage
-    loader.  It also expects to be running as root for the install, and to
-    install for the root user, which user CLFS cannot do.  The following command
-    will fix this:</para>
+    loader. It also tries to change user and group ownership for the installed
+    files to <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, which the
+    <systemitem class="username">clfs</systemitem> cannot do. The following
+    command fixes both issues:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp Makefile,{.orig}

BOOK/final-system/common/procps.xml

@@ -141 +141 @@
         <term><command>slabtop</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Displays detailed kernel slap cache information in real time</para>
+          <para>Displays detailed kernel slab cache information in real time</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-procps slabtop">
             <primary sortas="b-slabtop">slabtop</primary>

BOOK/final-system/common/udev.xml

@@ -177 +177 @@
           <para>Simulates a <command>udev</command> run for the given device,
           and prints out the name of the node the real <command>udev</command>
-          would have created or (not in CLFS) the name of the renamed network
-          interface</para>
+          would have created or the name of the renamed network interface</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev udevtest">
             <primary sortas="b-udevtest">udevtest</primary>
@@ -211 +210 @@
         <term><command>cdrom_id</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Print the capabilities of a cdrom or dvdrom drive.</para>
+          <para>Print the capabilities of a CDROM or DVDROM drive.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev cdrom_id">
             <primary sortas="b-cdrom_id">cdrom_id</primary>
@@ -282 +281 @@
         <term><command>usb_id</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Identify a usb block device.</para>
+          <para>Identify a USB block device.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev usb_id">
             <primary sortas="b-usb_id">usb_id</primary>
@@ -302 +301 @@
         <term><filename class="directory">/etc/udev</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Contains <command>udev</command> configuation files,
+          <para>Contains <command>udev</command> configuration files,
           device permissions, and rules for device naming</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev etc-udev">