Changeset 8c58c6c


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Timestamp:
Jul 17, 2006, 11:30:15 PM (13 years ago)
Author:
Jeremy Utley <jerutley@…>
Children:
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Parents:
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Message:

Minor foreword fixes thanks to Karen

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3 edited

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  • general.ent

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    33<!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
    44<!ENTITY month_name "July">
    5 <!ENTITY day "16"> <!-- Use two digits -->
     5<!ENTITY day "17"> <!-- Use two digits -->
    66<!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->
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  • introduction/common/changelog.xml

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    3838
    3939    <listitem>
     40      <para>July 17, 2006</para>
     41      <itemizedlist>
     42        <listitem>
     43          <para>[jeremy] - Minor foreword fixups courtesy of Karen`.</para>
     44        </listitem>
     45      </itemizedlist>
     46    </listitem>
     47
     48    <listitem>
    4049      <para>July 16, 2006</para>
    4150      <itemizedlist>
  • prologue/common/foreword.xml

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    2525  improvements to the Linux From Scratch system.</para>
    2626
    27   <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on a x86
     27  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on an x86
    2828  class processor.  With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
    2929  processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
     
    4040
    4141  <para>We hope you enjoy building your own CLFS system, and the benefits
    42   that come from a system tailored to your needs!</para>
     42  that come from a system tailored to your needs.</para>
    4343
    4444<literallayout>--
     
    4646Jim Gifford, CLFS Project Co-leader
    4747Ryan Oliver, CLFS Project Co-leader
    48 Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierin, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
     48Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierim, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
    4949Manuel Canales Esparcia, and Nathan Coulson - CLFS Developers</literallayout>
    5050
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