Changeset 89336bc for BOOK/final-system/common

Timestamp:

May 25, 2006, 10:17:39 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

cc5fa6e

Parents:

52704239

Message:

r3613@server (orig r1644): chris | 2006-05-25 09:50:35 -0700
Updated text and removed a redundancy in final-system introduction

File:

• BOOK/final-system/common/introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/final-system/common/introduction.xml

@@ -22 +22 @@
   program and library the package installed.</para>
 
-  <para os="b">If using the compiler optimizations provided in this chapter,
-  please review the optimization hint at <ulink
-  url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/>.  Compiler optimizations can make
-  a program run slightly faster, but they may also cause compilation
-  difficulties and problems when running the program. If a package
-  refuses to compile when using optimization, try to compile it without
-  optimization and see if that fixes the problem. Even if the package
+  <para os="b">If using compiler optimizations, please review the
+  optimization hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/>.
+  Compiler optimizations can make a program run slightly faster, but
+  they may also cause compilation difficulties and problems when
+  running the program. If a package refuses to compile when using
+  optimization, try to compile it without optimization and see if
+  that fixes the problem. Even if the package
   does compile when using optimization, there is the risk it may have
   been compiled incorrectly because of the complex interactions between
@@ -49 +49 @@
   removed.</para>
 
-  <para os="d">Before the installation instructions, each installation
-  page provides a concise description of what the package contains.
-  Following the installation instructions, there is a list of programs
-  and libraries (along with brief descriptions of these) that the
-  package installs.</para>
-
-  <para os="e">To keep track of which package installs particular files, a
+  <para os="d">To keep track of which package installs particular files, a
   package manager can be used. For a general overview of different styles of
   package managers, please take a look at the next page.</para>