Changeset 8659630 for BOOK/cross-tools

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:55:04 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

9afeb8b

Parents:

1aebe7f

Message:

r967@server (orig r965): jim | 2005-12-26 22:57:04 -0800

r1199@server: jim | 2005-12-26 22:55:55 -0800
Grammar fixes from Chris Staub. Thank you

Location:

BOOK/cross-tools

Files:

• common/binutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• common/cflags.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• common/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• x86/glibc-headers.xml (modified) (8 diffs)

BOOK/cross-tools/common/binutils.xml

@@ -101 +101 @@
         <term><parameter>--disable-multilib</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This options disables the building of a multilib
+          <para>This option disables the building of a multilib
           capable binutils.</para>
         </listitem>

BOOK/cross-tools/common/cflags.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Build CFLAGS</title>
 
-  <para><envar>CFLAGS</envar> during the building of cross tools must
-  not be set.</para>
+  <para><envar>CFLAGS</envar> and <envar>CXXFLAGS</envar> must not be set during the building of cross tools.</para>
 
   <para>To disable <envar>CFLAGS</envar> and <envar>CXXFLAGS</envar>
-  use the following command:</para>
+  use the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>unset CFLAGS

BOOK/cross-tools/common/introduction.xml

@@ -47 +47 @@
       <para>After installing each package, both in this and the next chapters,
       delete its source and build directories, unless specifically instructed
-      otherwise. Deleting the sources space and prevents mis-configuration
+      otherwise. Deleting the sources prevents mis-configuration
       when the same package is reinstalled later.</para>
     </important>

BOOK/cross-tools/x86/glibc-headers.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
     the glibc we are using in cross-lfs. The reason we are changing it is
     because this only installs the headers, no compiling takes place. In the
-    next glibc chapter, we use the gcc that's build right after this chapter.</para>
+    next glibc chapter, we use the gcc that's built right after this chapter.</para>
 
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>cp configure{,.orig}
@@ -73 +73 @@
 
       <varlistentry os="ca2">
-        <term><parameter>--prefix=/tools</parameter></term>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>This tells the configure script to prepare to install the
-          package in the <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>
-          directory.</para>
-        </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-
-      <varlistentry os="ca3">
         <term><parameter>--build=${LFS_HOST}</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -89 +80 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
-      <varlistentry os="ca4">
+      <varlistentry os="ca3">
         <term><parameter>--host=${LFS_TARGET}</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -97 +88 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
-      <varlistentry os="ca5">
+      <varlistentry os="ca4">
         <term><parameter>--disable-sanity-checks</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -104 +95 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
-      <varlistentry os="ca6">
+      <varlistentry os="ca5">
         <term><parameter>--enable-kernel=2.6.0</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -112 +103 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
-      <varlistentry os="ca7">
+      <varlistentry os="ca6">
         <term><parameter>--with-headers=/tools/include</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -122 +113 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
-      <varlistentry os="ca8">
+      <varlistentry os="ca7">
         <term><parameter>--with-binutils=/cross-tools/${LFS_TARGET}/bin</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
@@ -135 +126 @@
 <screen os="cd"><userinput>make install-headers</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="ce">Some files aren't installed by the above command, then
-    we will copy the header files we need:</para>
+    <para os="ce">Some files aren't installed by the above command, so we will copy the additional header files we need:</para>
 
     <para os="cf">First we will copy a common file over to <filename