Changeset 82bf1bb for BOOK/partitioning

Timestamp:

Jul 3, 2014, 1:33:52 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, sysvinit

Children:

359b123

Parents:

1c2a1ab

git-author:

Chris Staub <chris@…> (07/03/14 01:33:19)

git-committer:

Chris Staub <chris@…> (07/03/14 01:33:52)

Message:

Text updates for mips partitioning

File:

• BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/partitioning/mips/creatingpartition.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
   xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='e'])"/>
 
-  <para>On a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 we use the existing firmware for a boot loader,
-  it requires an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> revision 0
-  partition to boot from. So here is the recommended partition for a Cobalt
-  RaQ2/Cube2 system:</para>
+  <para>On a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 we use the existing firmware for a boot
+  loader&mdash;it requires an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>
+  revision 0 partition to boot from. Here is the recommended partition layout
+  for a Cobalt RaQ2/Cube2 system:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
@@ -46 +46 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>The third partition is going to be your swap partition, which will
-      be the same amount as the RAM installed in the system.</para>
+      be the same size as the amount as the RAM installed in the system.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>