Changeset 823185c in clfs-sysroot for BOOK/cross-tools

Timestamp:

Aug 30, 2006, 10:56:05 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Joe Ciccone <jciccone@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

f1583d4

Parents:

b275cd8

Message:

Text Updates.

Location:

BOOK/cross-tools

Files:

• arm/glibc-headers.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• common/binutils.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• common/glibc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/cross-tools/arm/glibc-headers.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
     the glibc we are using in cross-lfs. The reason we are changing it is
     because this only installs the headers, no compiling takes place. In the
-    next glibc chapter, we use the gcc that's built right after this chapter.</para>
+    next Glibc chapter, we use the GCC that's built right after this chapter.</para>
         
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>cp configure{,.orig}
@@ -77 +77 @@
              <term><parameter>CC=gcc</parameter></term>
              <listitem>
-                <para>Tells GLIBC to use the hosts GCC compiler.</para>
+                <para>Tells Glibc to use the hosts GCC compiler.</para>
              </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -97 +97 @@
 <screen os="l"><userinput>make install-headers</userinput></screen>
 
-   <para os="m">Some files aren't installed by the above command, then
-    we will copy the header files we need:</para>
+   <para os="m">Some files aren't installed by the above command, so
+    we will copy the additional header files we need.</para>
 
    <para os="n">First we will copy a common file over to <filename 
@@ -110 +110 @@
 <screen os="q"><userinput>touch ${CLFS}/usr/include/gnu/stubs.h</userinput></screen>
 
-   <para os="r">For NPTL we use the following command:</para>
+   <para os="r">Another header is needed for NPTL:</para>
    
 <screen os="s"><userinput>cp -v ../glibc-&glibc-version;/ports/sysdeps/unix/sysv/linux/arm/nptl/bits/pthreadtypes.h \

BOOK/cross-tools/common/binutils.xml

@@ -68 +68 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>When used with --target, this creates a cross-architecture
-          executable that creates files for ${CLFS_TARGET} but runs on ${CLFS_HOST).</para>
+          executable that creates files for ${CLFS_TARGET} but runs on
+          ${CLFS_HOST}.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -76 +77 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>When used with --host, this creates a cross-architecture
-          executable that creates files for ${CLFS_TARGET} but runs on ${CLFS_HOST).</para>
+          executable that creates files for ${CLFS_TARGET} but runs on
+          ${CLFS_HOST}.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -84 +86 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>This tells configure that ${CLFS} is going to be the root
-          of our system. It will now use the specified sysroot, ${CLFS} as
+          of our system. It will now use the specified sysroot, ${CLFS}, as
           a prefix of the default search paths.</para>
         </listitem>

BOOK/cross-tools/common/glibc.xml

@@ -557 +557 @@
         <term><command>sln</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>A statically linked <command>ln</command> program</para>
+          <para>A statically linked program that creates symbolic links</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-cross-tools-glibc sln">
             <primary sortas="b-sln">sln</primary>
@@ -742 +742 @@
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">libmemusage</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Used by <command>memusage</command> to help collect
-          information about the memory usage of a program</para>
+          <para>Used by <command>memusage</command> (included in Glibc, but
+          not built in a base CLFS system as it has additional dependencies)
+          to help collect information about the memory usage of a program</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-cross-tools-glibc libmemusage">
             <primary sortas="c-libmemusage">libmemusage</primary>