Changeset 7691941

Timestamp:

Jan 14, 2009, 2:27:24 PM (15 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

b09c166

Parents:

4894bf1

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK/final-system/common

Files:

• diffutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• tar.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/final-system/common/diffutils.xml

@@ -34 +34 @@
 <screen os="b"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="s1">Diffutils wants ed as the default editor, the following sed will allow us
-    to use vim:</para>
+    <para os="s1">Diffutils wants <command>ed</command> as the default editor.
+    The following sed will change the default to <command>vim</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="s2"><userinput>sed -i 's@\(^#define DEFAULT_EDITOR_PROGRAM \).*@\1"vi"@' config.h</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/common/tar.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
     <title>Installation of Tar</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patch add a man page for tar:</para>
+    <para os="p1">The following patch adds a man page for <command>tar</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-man_page-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
     <para os="p3">The following patch contains a fix for an issue that may occur
-    when tar calls an outside compression utility like bzip2:</para>
+    when <command>tar</command> calls an outside compression utility like
+    <command>bzip2</command>:</para>
 
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&tar-revert_pipe_drain-patch;</userinput></screen>