Changeset 6ebe429 in clfs-embedded for BOOK

Timestamp:

Feb 5, 2011, 2:39:13 PM (14 years ago)

Author:

Andrew Bradford <bradfa@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

eabbc52

Parents:

deb99a3

Message:

Copy editing of WRT section 1.5

Changed small endian to be little endian and fixed spelling / grammar.

File:

• BOOK/introduction/wrt/supporteddevices.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

BOOK/introduction/wrt/supporteddevices.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="supported-devices.html"?>
 
-  <para>In order to build CLFS for your device, we need to know what processor it has, amd more inportantly if it is a big or small edin, and what MIPS ISA level it is. The MIPS ISA level is needed so that we can build uClibc properly. </para>
+  <para>In order to build CLFS for your device, we need to know what processor
+  it has, if it is big or little endian, and what MIPS ISA level it is. The 
+  MIPS ISA level is needed so that we can build uClibc properly. </para>
 
-  <para> The following is a list of devices that have been tested and reported as tested and working with this book. Apart from this list, there is no garentee that your device, apart from this list will work. If U secussfully get a device to work, please contact the CLFS Dev team, and we will add it to the list. For the most recent and up to date list, please view the SVN version of this book. </para>
+  <para>The following is a list of devices that have been tested and reported 
+  as tested and working with this book. Apart from this list, there is no 
+  guarantee that your device, will work. If you are successful in getting a
+  device to work, please contact the CLFS development team, and we will add 
+  it to the list. For the most recent and up to date list, please view the 
+  GIT version of this book. </para>
 
   <table os="g">
@@ -24 +31 @@
       <colspec colnum="3" colwidth="1in"   colname="Supported - Working"/>
       <colspec colnum="4" colwidth="2.2in" colname="Processor"/>
-      <colspec colnum="5" colwidth="1.1in" colname="Big or Small Endian"/>
+      <colspec colnum="5" colwidth="1.1in" colname="Endian"/>
       <colspec colnum="6" colwidth="1in"   colname="Mips Level"/>
 
@@ -33 +40 @@
           <entry>Supported - Working</entry>
           <entry>Processor</entry>
-          <entry>Big or Small Endian</entry>
+          <entry>Endian</entry>
           <entry>Mips Level</entry>
         </row>
@@ -44 +51 @@
           <entry>Testing</entry>
           <entry>Broadcom 4712 @ 200MHz, 2MB Flash, 8MB RAM</entry>
-          <entry>Small</entry>
+          <entry>Little</entry>
           <entry>1 or 2, testing</entry>
         </row>