Changeset 6d4c909 for BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:56:25 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

ad0c7e6

Parents:

f0ed7ed

Message:

r974@server (orig r972): jim | 2005-12-28 21:29:16 -0800

r1216@server: jim | 2005-12-28 21:26:31 -0800
Text Updates from Chris Staub. Thank you

File:

• BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     and no Threads</title>
 
-    <para os="aa">We will make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
+    <para os="aa">First make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
     to point to use our build environment:</para>
 
 <screen os="ab"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-specs-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="ac">To make sure that we use the proper syntax for a couple of tools,
-    we apply the following patch:</para>
+    <para os="ac">To make sure that a couple of tools use the proper syntax,
+    apply the following patch:</para>
 
 <screen os="ad"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-posix-patch;</userinput></screen>
@@ -41 +41 @@
 <screen os="af"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-cross_search-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="ag">Now we will need to setup our StartFile Spec to the correct library
+    <para os="ag">Now setup the StartFile Spec to the correct library
     location:</para>
 
@@ -48 +48 @@
 #define STARTFILE_PREFIX_SPEC \"/tools/lib/\"" &gt;&gt; gcc/config/linux.h</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="ai">Now we will alter <command>gcc</command>'s c preprocessors default
+    <para os="ai">Now alter <command>gcc</command>'s c preprocessors default
     include search path to use <filename class="directory">/tools</filename> only:</para>
 
@@ -102 +102 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>This will prevent GCC from finding the multi-thread
-          include files, since we haven't created them for this architecture
-          yet. We will be able to find the multi-thread information after
-          we create the Glibc headers.</para>
+          include files, since they haven't been created for this architecture
+          yet. GCC will be able to find the multi-thread information after
+          the Glibc headers are created.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>