Changeset 6bb43b3 for BOOK/temp-system/common

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:26:16 AM (19 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

cedcdaa

Parents:

e47ec16

Message:

r788@server (orig r786): jim | 2005-12-01 12:07:35 -0800

r851@server: jim | 2005-12-01 12:07:08 -0800
Text updates from G. Moko. Thank You

Location:

BOOK/temp-system/common

Files:

• bash.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• choose.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gettext.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gzip.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• zlib.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/temp-system/common/bash.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
     <title>Installation of Bash</title>
 
-    <para os="aa">Fix a minor issue during the build when cross-compling:</para>
+    <para os="aa">Fix a minor issue during the build when cross-compiling:</para>
 
 <screen os="ab"><userinput>cp Makefile.in Makefile.in.orig
@@ -58 +58 @@
           <para>This options turns off the use of Bash's memory allocation
           (malloc) function which is known to cause segmentation faults.
-          By turning this option off, Bash will use the malloc functions
+          By turning this option off, Bash will use the malloc function
           from Glibc which are more stable.</para>
         </listitem>

BOOK/temp-system/common/choose.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>TO BE WRITTEN...
-  Introductory text about the diferecies between the boot and chroot method
+  Introductory text about the differencies between the boot and chroot methods
   and who can use any of them or who can use only one.</para>
 

BOOK/temp-system/common/gettext.xml

@@ -42 +42 @@
           <para>This flag tells Gettext not to build the <filename
           class="libraryfile">asprintf</filename> library. Because
-          nothing in this chapter or the next requires this library a
-          nd Gettext gets rebuilt later, exclude it to save time
+          nothing in this chapter or the next requires this library
+          and Gettext gets rebuilt later, exclude it to save time
           and space.</para>
         </listitem>

BOOK/temp-system/common/gzip.xml

@@ -52 +52 @@
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='h'])"/>
 
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
-    href="../../final-system/common/gzip.xml"
-    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='i'])"/>
-
   </sect2>
 

BOOK/temp-system/common/zlib.xml

@@ -39 +39 @@
         <term><parameter>--shared</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Tells zlib to build shared libraries.</para>
+          <para>Tells zlib to build shared library.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>