Changeset 69ce2ab in clfs-embedded for BOOK/introduction

Timestamp:

Feb 6, 2011, 12:47:29 PM (14 years ago)

Author:

Andrew Bradford <bradfa@…>

Branches:

master

Children:

a6b5527

Parents:

9cbe486 (diff), ee73578 (diff)
Note: this is a merge changeset, the changes displayed below correspond to the merge itself.
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Message:

Merge branch 'myclfs' into moveBUILD

Location:

BOOK/introduction

Files:

• common/resources.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• wrt/supporteddevices.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
     <title>Mailing Lists</title>
 
-    <para>The <uri>linuxfromscratch.org</uri> server hosts a number of
+    <para>The <uri>cross-lfs.org</uri> server hosts a number of
     mailing lists used for the development of the CLFS project. These lists
     include the main development and support lists, among others. If the
     FAQ does not solve the problem you are having, the next step would be to
-    search the mailing lists at <ulink url="&lfs-root;search.html"/>.</para>
+    search the mailing lists at <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/lists"/>.</para>
 
     <para>For information on the different lists, how to subscribe, archive
     locations, and additional information, visit
-    <ulink url="&lfs-root;mail.html"/>. For mailing lists specifically
-    for CLFS, visit <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/lists"/>.</para>
+    <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/lists"/>.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -55 +54 @@
     <uri>chat.freenode.net</uri>. The support channel for cross-lfs
     is named #cross-lfs. If you need to show people the output of your
-    problems, please use http://pastebin.cross-lfs.org and reference
-    the pastebin URL when asking your questions.</para>
+    problems, please use <ulink url="http://pastebin.cross-lfs.org"/> and 
+    reference the pastebin URL when asking your questions.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -72 +71 @@
     <title>Mirror Sites</title>
 
-    <para>The LFS project has a number of world-wide mirrors to make
+    <para>The LFS and CLFS projects have a number of world-wide mirrors to make
     accessing the website and downloading the required packages more
     convenient. Please visit the LFS website at <ulink
     url="&lfs-root;mirrors.html"/> for a list of current mirrors of
     the LFS website, or <ulink url="&clfs-wiki;wiki/mirrors"/> for
-    mirrors of CLFS.</para>
+    mirrors of the CLFS website.</para>
 
   </sect2>

BOOK/introduction/wrt/supporteddevices.xml

@@ -10 +10 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="supported-devices.html"?>
 
-  <para>In order to build CLFS for your device, we need to know what processor it has, amd more inportantly if it is a big or small edin, and what MIPS ISA level it is. The MIPS ISA level is needed so that we can build uClibc properly. </para>
+  <para>In order to build CLFS for your device, we need to know what processor
+  it has, if it is big or little endian, and what MIPS ISA level it is. The 
+  MIPS ISA level is needed so that we can build uClibc properly. </para>
 
-  <para> The following is a list of devices that have been tested and reported as tested and working with this book. Apart from this list, there is no garentee that your device, apart from this list will work. If U secussfully get a device to work, please contact the CLFS Dev team, and we will add it to the list. For the most recent and up to date list, please view the SVN version of this book. </para>
+  <para>The following is a list of devices that have been tested and reported 
+  as tested and working with this book. Apart from this list, there is no 
+  guarantee that your device, will work. If you are successful in getting a
+  device to work, please contact the CLFS development team, and we will add 
+  it to the list. For the most recent and up to date list, please view the 
+  GIT version of this book. </para>
 
   <table os="g">
@@ -24 +31 @@
       <colspec colnum="3" colwidth="1in"   colname="Supported - Working"/>
       <colspec colnum="4" colwidth="2.2in" colname="Processor"/>
-      <colspec colnum="5" colwidth="1.1in" colname="Big or Small Endian"/>
+      <colspec colnum="5" colwidth="1.1in" colname="Endian"/>
       <colspec colnum="6" colwidth="1in"   colname="Mips Level"/>
 
@@ -33 +40 @@
           <entry>Supported - Working</entry>
           <entry>Processor</entry>
-          <entry>Big or Small Endian</entry>
+          <entry>Endian</entry>
           <entry>Mips Level</entry>
         </row>
@@ -44 +51 @@
           <entry>Testing</entry>
           <entry>Broadcom 4712 @ 200MHz, 2MB Flash, 8MB RAM</entry>
-          <entry>Small</entry>
+          <entry>Little</entry>
           <entry>1 or 2, testing</entry>
         </row>