Changes in BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml [ef7cdfb:6243b1f]

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• BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml

@@ -20 +20 @@
     <note os="a">
       <para>The commands in the remainder of the book should be run as
-      the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Also,
-      double-check that ${CLFS} is set as
-      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>.</para>
+      the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Check 
+      that ${CLFS} is set in the 
+      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user&rsquo;s environment
+       before proceeding.</para>
     </note>
 
@@ -38 +39 @@
 mknod -m 666 ${CLFS}/dev/null c 1 3</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Before udev starts a tmpfs filesystem is mounted over <filename class="directory">/dev</filename> and the previous entries are no-longer available. The folling command creates files that are copied over by the udev bootscript:</para>
+    <para>Before udev starts, a tmpfs filesystem is mounted over
+    <filename class="directory">/dev</filename> and the previous entries are
+    no longer available. The following command creates files that are copied
+    over by the udev bootscript:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mknod -m 600 ${CLFS}/lib/udev/devices/console c 5 1