Changeset 6243b1f for BOOK/boot

Timestamp:

Nov 24, 2012, 3:33:08 AM (12 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

dfa8f775

Parents:

12736de

Message:

Text updates

Location:

BOOK/boot/common

Files:

• devices.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• sysvinit.xml (modified) (1 diff)

BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml

@@ -39 +39 @@
 mknod -m 666 ${CLFS}/dev/null c 1 3</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Before udev starts a tmpfs filesystem is mounted over <filename class="directory">/dev</filename> and the previous entries are no-longer available. The folling command creates files that are copied over by the udev bootscript:</para>
+    <para>Before udev starts, a tmpfs filesystem is mounted over
+    <filename class="directory">/dev</filename> and the previous entries are
+    no longer available. The following command creates files that are copied
+    over by the udev bootscript:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mknod -m 600 ${CLFS}/lib/udev/devices/console c 5 1

BOOK/boot/common/sysvinit.xml

@@ -24 +24 @@
 
     <para os="aa">The following modifications help locate files specific to this
-    perticular build:</para>
+    particular build:</para>
 
 <screen os="ab"><userinput>cp -v src/Makefile{,.orig}