Changeset 58303ae in clfs-embedded for BOOK/beyond-intro


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Timestamp:
Apr 19, 2011, 4:41:42 AM (14 years ago)
Author:
Andrew Bradford <bradfa@…>
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git-author:
Andrew Bradford <bradfa@…> (04/19/11 04:09:49)
git-committer:
Andrew Bradford <bradfa@…> (04/19/11 04:41:42)
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Update beyond-intro intro to be more generic

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  • BOOK/beyond-intro/common/introduction.xml

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    1111  <title>Introduction</title>
    1212
    13   <para os="a">Now that we have our base system built, we need to add some
    14   functionality to our build.</para>
     13  <para os="a">Now that we have our base system built, we may add some optional
     14  additional functionality.</para>
    1515
    16   <para os="b">In this section, we explain how to compile embedded packages
     16  <para os="b">In this section, we explain how to compile additional packages
    1717  for use with the system. We will also cover how to configure some of the
    1818  Busybox Utilities.</para>
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