Changeset 56d9c50

Timestamp:

Feb 21, 2006, 1:59:42 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Jim Gifford <clfs@…>

Children:

175fea57

Parents:

6b015a8

Message:

r990@server (orig r988): jim | 2006-01-02 14:11:31 -0800

r1247@server: cstaub | 2006-01-02 10:38:54 -0800
Fixed Changelog, added 'meaning of make parameter' to final-system binutils for consistency with the rest of the book, and various grammar fixes.

Files:

• bootable/x86/kernel.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-preps/settingenviron.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/binutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• final-system/common/iana-etc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general.ent (modified) (2 diffs)
• introduction/common/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)

bootable/x86/kernel.xml

@@ -75 +75 @@
 
     <note os="l">
-      <para>Linux-2.6 kernel series requires to be compiled with GCC-3.x or
+      <para>Linux-2.6 kernel series is required to be compiled with GCC-3.x or
       later, in this case &gcc-version;. It is not recommended to compile the
       kernel with GCC-2.95.x, as this causes failures in the Glibc test suite.

final-preps/settingenviron.xml

@@ -82 +82 @@
   <para os="j">By putting <filename class="directory">/cross-tools/bin</filename> ahead
   of the standard <envar>PATH</envar>, all the programs installed in
-  <xref linkend="chapter-temp-system"/> are created up by the cross-compiler
+  <xref linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/> are picked up by the cross-compiler
   immediately after their installation. This, combined with turning off
   hashing, limits the risk that old programs are used from the host when
-  when building a sane set of cross-compiler tools.</para>
+  building a sane set of cross-compiler tools.</para>
 
   <para os="k">Finally, to have the environment fully prepared for building the

final-system/common/binutils.xml

@@ -77 +77 @@
 <screen os="m"><userinput>make tooldir=/usr</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="n">Normally, the tooldir (the directory where the executables
-    will ultimately be located) is set to <filename
-    class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename>. Because this
-    is a custom system, this target-specific directory in <filename
-    class="directory">/usr</filename> is not required.</para>
+    <variablelist os="n">
+      <title>The meaning of the make parameter:</title>
+
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term><parameter>tooldir=/usr</parameter></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>Normally, the tooldir (the directory where the executables
+          will ultimately be located) is set to <filename
+          class="directory">$(exec_prefix)/$(target_alias)</filename>. Because this
+          is a custom system, this target-specific directory in <filename
+          class="directory">/usr</filename> is not required.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
 
     <important os="o">

final-system/common/iana-etc.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <indexterm zone="ch-system-iana-etc">
-    <primary sortas="a-Iana-Etc">Coreutils, Gawk, and Iana-Etc</primary>
+    <primary sortas="a-Iana-Etc">Iana-Etc</primary>
   </indexterm>
 

general.ent

@@ -1 +1 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
 
-<!ENTITY version "CLFS-SVN-20051231">
+<!ENTITY version "CLFS-SVN-20060102">
 <!ENTITY version-x86 "&version;-x86">
 <!ENTITY version-x86_64 "&version;-x86_64-Multilib">
@@ -15 +15 @@
 <!ENTITY version-alpha "&version;-ALPHA">
 
-<!ENTITY releasedate "December 31, 2005">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "January 02, 2006">
 <!ENTITY milestone "0.1">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "svn"> <!-- Use "svn", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->

introduction/common/changelog.xml

@@ -44 +44 @@
           removed note about GRUB's testsuite failure.</para>
         </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-    </listitem>      
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>December 30, 2005</para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>[Chris] - Updated package dependencies, removed explanation of
-          "target alias" and "cross-compiling" from final-system binutils, and
-          removed note about GRUB's testsuite failure.</para>
-        </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[ken] - Fix where tree gets installed.</para>