Changeset 3df6c70 for BOOK/final-system

Timestamp:

Jul 11, 2006, 10:28:53 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

Chris Staub <chris@…>

Branches:

clfs-1.2, clfs-2.1, clfs-3.0.0-systemd, clfs-3.0.0-sysvinit, master, systemd, sysvinit

Children:

37efcbc

Parents:

adb2d7f

Message:

Text fixes, mainly in capitalization in the names of Lilo and GRUB

Location:

BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64

Files:

• bin86.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• lilo.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/bin86.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
     <title>Installation of Bin86</title>
 
-    <para os="a">We are building bin86 because it is required to
-      compile lilo, and at the moment no other bootloader builds and runs
+    <para os="a">We are building Bin86 because it is required to
+      compile Lilo, and at the moment no other bootloader builds and runs
       on a pure64 system. If your machine has multiple systems (i.e. x86
       or multilib) you may prefer to use the bootloader from those
-      systems, such as grub.</para>
+      systems, such as GRUB.</para>
 
-    <para os="p1">This patch updates bin86 to compile on x86_64:</para>
+    <para os="p1">This patch updates Bin86 to compile on x86_64:</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&bin86-x86_64-patch;</userinput></screen>

BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64/lilo.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
     <para os="a">The Lilo package contains the Linux Loader, a bootloader.</para>
 
-    <para os="b">We have chosen to use lilo because at the moment no other
+    <para os="b">We have chosen to use Lilo because at the moment no other
       bootloader builds and runs on a pure64 system. If your machine has
       multiple systems (i.e. x86 or multilib) you may prefer to use the
-      bootloader from the other system, such as grub.</para>
+      bootloader from the other system, such as GRUB.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -40 +40 @@
     <para>At the end of the installation the make install process will
       print a message stating that /sbin/lilo has to be executed to
-      complete the update. Don&quot;t do this as it has no use. The
-      /etc/lilo.conf isn&quot;t present yet. We will complete the
-      installation of lilo in chapter 12.</para>
+      complete the update. Don't do this as it has no use. The
+      /etc/lilo.conf isn't present yet. We will complete the
+      installation of Lilo in chapter 12.</para>
 
   </sect2>